ELA in Science
CoreScientific writing: conclusion

Conclusion & Discussion

Write a conclusion that answers the question, says whether the hypothesis was supported, explains what the results mean, names the limitations, and suggests a next step.

Why this matters

The Results section shows what happened; the Conclusion and Discussion explain what it means. This is where a report stops being a pile of numbers and becomes a finding. A strong conclusion does five jobs in order: it answers the original question, states whether the hypothesis was supported, explains what the results mean using a science idea, names the limitations and possible sources of error, and suggests a next step. Physicians write this section when they interpret a patient's test results and plan follow-up care, clinical researchers write it when they decide whether a drug trial met its goal, and epidemiologists write it when they translate raw case counts into a public-health recommendation. Learn to separate reporting the data from interpreting it, and to be honest about limits, and your conclusions stop sounding like guesses and start sounding like evidence-based claims a reader can trust.

Standards this builds
  • Common Core · WHST.9-10.2Write informative/explanatory texts that examine and convey complex ideas clearly, including a concluding statement that follows from and supports the information presented.
  • Common Core · RST.9-10.7Translate quantitative or technical information (data and results) into words to explain what it means.
  • NGSS · SEP-8Obtaining, Evaluating, and Communicating Information: communicate scientific findings clearly, distinguishing evidence from interpretation.
  • Ohio · Ohio ELA W.9-10.2Write to inform or explain, drawing a conclusion that follows logically from the evidence presented.
  • AP · AP Bio SP 6Justify scientific claims with evidence and evaluate the limitations of an investigation.
Builds on (2 levels back)inferred · high confidence
  • Read values from a data table or graph: A conclusion is built from the results, so students must be able to read the numbers accurately before interpreting them.
  • Write an if-then hypothesis: The conclusion has to say whether the hypothesis was supported, so students first need to know what a hypothesis is.
  • Tell a research question apart from its answer: The first job of a conclusion is to answer the question, so students must be able to identify what was being asked.

Prerequisites are inferred: pending teacher review.

Re-learn the skill with worked practice and clear examples.

Write a full conclusion by running the five moves in order: answer the question, state whether the hypothesis was supported, explain what the results mean, name a limitation or source of error, and suggest a next step. Use the data table below and follow the worked model.

Step 1: Answer the question and check the hypothesis
Read the data first. The table shows the sanitizer plate had 12 colonies and the water plate had 40. Answer: sanitizer reduced bacteria more. Then check the hypothesis: if it predicted that, it was supported.
TreatmentBacterial colonies
Hand sanitizer12
Plain water40
Results table: hand sanitizer plate 12 colonies, plain water plate 40 colonies
Step 2: Explain what the results mean
Use a science idea to interpret: 'Fewer colonies means fewer bacteria survived, so the sanitizer killed more bacteria than water did.' This is the Discussion, not a repeat of the numbers.
Step 3: Name a limitation, then suggest a next step
Be honest: 'Only one plate was tested per group, so the difference could partly be chance.' Then point forward: 'Next, repeat with five plates per group.'
Model conclusion: 'Hand sanitizer reduced bacteria more than plain water (answer). This supported our hypothesis (supported). The sanitizer plate had only 12 colonies versus 40, meaning fewer bacteria survived on it (meaning). A limitation is that only one plate was used per group, so some difference could be chance (limitation). Next, we would repeat the test with five plates per group (next step).'
Practice

A student wrote: 'Hand sanitizer reduced bacteria more than plain water. This supported our hypothesis. The sanitizer plate had only 12 colonies versus 40, so fewer bacteria survived. Next, we would test five plates per group.' Which of the five conclusion moves is MISSING?

Reviewed
  1. A.Answering the question
  2. B.Stating whether the hypothesis was supported
  3. C.Naming a limitation or source of error
  4. D.Explaining what the results mean
Show the worked solution ▾

Answer: C. Naming a limitation or source of error

  1. Step 1: Check the paragraph against all five moves: It answers the question, says the hypothesis was supported, explains the meaning (fewer survived), and gives a next step.
  2. Step 2: Name what is absent: There is no honest note about what could weaken the results, so the limitation move is missing.

Why it's right: The paragraph has the answer, the hypothesis judgment, the meaning, and a next step, but it never names a limitation or source of error, so that is the missing move.

Why the others miss:
  • A: The question is answered in the first sentence (sanitizer reduced bacteria more).
  • B: The hypothesis judgment is present ('This supported our hypothesis').
  • D: The meaning is explained ('fewer bacteria survived').

Aligned to Common Core WHST.9-10.2: a complete concluding statement · reading level ~grade 9

Using the table (hand sanitizer 12 colonies, plain water 40 colonies), which sentence best EXPLAINS WHAT THE RESULTS MEAN rather than just repeating the data?

Reviewed
TreatmentBacterial colonies
Hand sanitizer12
Plain water40
Results table: hand sanitizer plate 12 colonies, plain water plate 40 colonies
  1. A.The sanitizer plate had 12 colonies and the water plate had 40 colonies.
  2. B.Because fewer colonies means fewer bacteria survived, the lower count shows the sanitizer killed more bacteria than water.
  3. C.We should always use hand sanitizer.
  4. D.The colonies were counted two days after the plates were prepared.
Show the worked solution ▾

Answer: B. Because fewer colonies means fewer bacteria survived, the lower count shows the sanitizer killed more bacteria than water.

  1. Step 1: Meaning uses a science idea: Look for a sentence that explains why the numbers matter, not one that just states them.
  2. Step 2: Compare the options: Only option B links the count to a science idea (fewer colonies means fewer survivors) to explain the result.

Why it's right: Explaining the meaning connects the data to a science idea, and option B explains that a lower colony count means fewer bacteria survived, so the sanitizer killed more.

Why the others miss:
  • A: This just repeats the data; it does not explain what it means.
  • C: This is a recommendation, not an explanation of the result.
  • D: This is a method detail, not an interpretation of the result.

Aligned to RST.9-10.7: translate data into what it means · reading level ~grade 9

A hypothesis predicted that plants given fertilizer would grow taller than plants given only water. The fertilizer plants averaged 22 cm and the water plants averaged 22 cm. Which sentence correctly states the hypothesis result?

Reviewed
  1. A.The hypothesis was proven true.
  2. B.The hypothesis was supported, because fertilizer clearly grew taller plants.
  3. C.The hypothesis was not supported, because both groups grew to the same average height.
  4. D.The hypothesis cannot be judged from this data.
Show the worked solution ▾

Answer: C. The hypothesis was not supported, because both groups grew to the same average height.

  1. Step 1: Compare the prediction to the data: The hypothesis predicted the fertilizer plants would be taller, but both groups averaged 22 cm.
  2. Step 2: Choose supported or not supported: Because the data did not show taller fertilizer plants, the hypothesis was not supported. Note we never say 'proven'.

Why it's right: The prediction was that fertilizer plants would be taller, but both averaged 22 cm, so the results did not agree with the prediction and the hypothesis was not supported.

Why the others miss:
  • A: A hypothesis is never 'proven'; we say supported or not supported.
  • B: This is false: the averages are equal (22 cm each), so fertilizer did not grow taller plants.
  • D: The data is enough to judge: equal averages mean the prediction was not met.

Aligned to Common Core WHST.9-10.2: state whether the hypothesis was supported · reading level ~grade 9

Where you'd see this
  • A student writes the conclusion of a PLTW lab as a five-move paragraph, checking off each move.
  • A test-taker answers a short-response prompt by answering the question, judging the hypothesis, and explaining the meaning.
  • A group revises a weak conclusion by adding the missing limitation sentence.
Video library
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Guided notes

Fill these in as you work through the lesson.

Big idea: A conclusion interprets the results: it answers the question, says whether the hypothesis was supported, explains what the results mean, names a limitation or source of error, and suggests a next step.
Key terms: write the meaning
  • Conclusion (the one-sentence answer to the research question):  
  • Results vs. Discussion (data with no opinion vs. what the data means):  
  • Hypothesis supported (did the results agree with the prediction (never 'proven')):  
  • Limitation (an honest note about what could weaken the results):  
The rule

A conclusion answers the  , states whether the hypothesis was  , explains what the results  , names a   or source of error, and suggests a   step.

Check yourself
  1. Write one sentence that answers the research question 'Does hand sanitizer reduce bacteria more than plain water?' 
  2. The sanitizer plate had 12 colonies and the water plate had 40. Write a sentence explaining what that means, not just the numbers. 
  3. Name one specific limitation of a study that used only one plate per group, and say which way it could shift the result. 
Work one example

Turn this into a five-move conclusion: sanitizer plate = 12 colonies, water plate = 40 colonies, and the hypothesis predicted sanitizer would win. Answer: ____. Hypothesis: ____. Meaning: ____. Limitation: ____. Next step: ____.

 
Illustrated glossary

The vocabulary of this topic, shown in the way you will meet it.

Conclusion
The short answer to the research question, stated in one clear sentence based on the results.
In context: Conclusion: 'The hand sanitizer reduced the number of bacterial colonies more than plain water did.'
Results vs. Discussion
Results report the data with no opinion; the Discussion interprets that data and explains what it means.
Two panels: a teal Results panel listing plate counts with no opinion, and a violet Discussion panel interpreting the lower count as more bacteria killed
In context: Results: 'Plate A had 12 colonies and Plate B had 40.' Discussion: 'The lower count on Plate A shows the sanitizer killed more bacteria.'
Hypothesis supported
A statement of whether the results agreed with the prediction. The hypothesis is either supported or not supported; it is never 'proven'.
In context: 'The hypothesis that sanitizer lowers bacteria more than water was supported, because Plate A had far fewer colonies.'
Limitation
An honest note about something that could weaken the results, such as a small sample, an uncontrolled variable, or a measurement error.
In context: Limitation: 'Only one plate was used per group, so the difference could partly be chance rather than the sanitizer.'
Source of error
A specific place where a mistake or uncontrolled factor could have changed the measurement.
In context: Source of error: 'Colonies that grew together may have been counted as one, lowering the true count.'
Next step
A suggested new experiment or improvement that follows from the results and their limitations.
In context: Next step: 'Repeat the test with five plates per group to see if the difference holds up.'